Yep - your work blows me away. As for the big frame rail, maybe you could continue the top curve up toward the cab so it didn't even look like a frame rail (look at the bad pic to see what I mean). Maybe it just needs something to break up the big surface, like something that bumps out right there - just some thoughts.
EDIT: not sure my thin red line showed up very well....
EDIT: not sure my thin red line showed up very well....